NarutoGaiden

Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.
NarutoGaiden

This is Naruo Rivals 2.0 the advanced version of Naruto Rivals.

Affiliate

~None at the Moment~

Latest topics

» Kiyomi Senshin vs. [Whoever Wants To Join]
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptySun Mar 06, 2011 12:17 pm by Kiyomi Senshin

» Traveling to Amakagakure
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptyWed May 26, 2010 5:48 pm by Sadara Uchiha

» Kyosuke Kagami finish
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptyFri May 21, 2010 4:39 pm by Asher Senju

» Katsu Uchiha (W.I.P)
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptyThu May 20, 2010 8:15 pm by Leo

» Kusanagi clan
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptyFri May 14, 2010 12:08 am by Asher Senju

» Kyo Kusanagi WIP
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptyFri May 14, 2010 12:05 am by Asher Senju

» Mizukage's Office
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptySun May 09, 2010 11:21 am by Cornelio Uchiha

» Zaku And (Whoever Wants To Join)
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptySun May 09, 2010 5:39 am by Zaku Hitashi

» A boreing day...or not.
Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} EmptySat May 08, 2010 3:05 pm by Iori


3 posters

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Sintayo Korigochi
    Sintayo Korigochi


    Posts : 1
    Join date : 2010-05-05

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Sintayo Korigochi Wed May 05, 2010 9:14 am

    Name: Sintayo Korigochi

    Age: 18

    Rank: Chuunin

    Gender: Male

    Appearance: Sin stands about 5\' 11\" and looks to be roughly around 180 lbs. He has vibrant blue eyes almost to a gray. He has a clean facial structure and people tend to say his looks are perfection though he hates hearing that. He has no scars on his face but most of them are on his body. He has long flowing white hair that falls to about the small of his back.

    He wears a long, white robe, worn at all times. The hood to this robe, also at all times, covers his face, hiding his face at all times. If you were to look at him, only the whites of his eyes would show. Otherwise, only a shadow would cast over his face. This robe is worn over his body armor, which, obviously, is worn at all times as well. He wears leather armor, which is rugged, and keeps him more protected than that of regular leather, so it is a form of studded leather armor. He wears boots to cover his feet.

    Personality: He\'s shy, cold and harsh. he doesn\'t talk much and mainly sticks to himself unless he needs something from that person. He rarely will ask for help even when facing death, and he tries to avoid other people, and he\'s out for himself and won\'t help someone else unless there\'s something in it for him, and he has an explosive temper.

    He enjoys a challenge and he would never back down from one. He tries to avoid petty fights and arguments but doesn\'t mind putting someone in their place if they act tougher than he thinks they are. He\'s about as likely to defend someone as he is to attack them without reason.

    Sin will rarely make a friend for he feels that any friends or loved ones are weaknesses that an enemy can take from you and hold against you. He also feels that any sort of emotion other than anger is a sign of weakness so he tends to not care or love for anyone. Not even himself.

    Village: Konoha

    Skill Specialty:
    Main: Ninjutsu
    Sub: Weaponry

    Elemental Affinity:Raiton, Doton

    Special Characteristics:N/A

    Nindo: Remember, I don\'t miss twice.

    Equipment: Name: Lightning Blade
    Quantity: 1
    Rank: D
    Appearance:
    Spoiler:
    It\'s the blade, not the person.
    It\'s the blade, not the person.

    Special Abilities/Characteristics: Only special characteristic is that the blade looks like a bolt of lightning and small bolts of electricity surge around it.
    Origin: The blade was forged in the cave of a tall Volcano. Sin felt that the blade he had needed to represent him in some way, shape or form. He took cold steel and forged it into the shape of a lightning bolt. After the cooling he climbed to the peak and focused his chakra in the midst of a storm and as he called upon his lightning chakra he focused the bolt into the blade thus making the crackling lightning appear around the blade. It offers no special effect, he mainly did this for appearances.

    Name: Earth Axe
    Quantity: 1
    Rank: D
    Appearance:
    Spoiler:
    Special Abilities/Characteristics: Only special characteristic is that the axe head is hard as a rock.
    Origin: Shortly after making his blade, Sin found a large stick on the ground. He dug a hole into the earth and focused his Chakra to from a rock-like coating around the stick. He found a large rock and merged it to the hardened stick causing it to hold together and shape of an axe.

    Name: Kunai
    Quantity: 25
    Rank: E
    Appearance: It is only that of a basic Kunai
    Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A.
    Origin:

    Jutsu: Name: Lesser Haste
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Lightning
    Description: The user infuses their lightning chakra with their non-elemental chakra, which boosts their speed, and allows them to move at which seems to be the speed of light.
    This lesser version makes him move about 3X faster for 2 posts, having the opponent miss the user with all projectiles thrown, or any sort of ninjutsu.

    Name: Lesser Melee Haste
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Lightning
    Description: The user infuses their lightning chakra with their non-elemental chakra, which boosts their attack speed, and allows them to attack at which seems to be the speed of light.
    This lesser version makes him move about 3X faster for 2 posts, having the opponent less likely to dodge an attack.

    Name: Lightning Bolt
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Lightning
    Description: The user focuses their chakra and performs hand signals to shoot a lightning bolt from their palm directly at the target. If the user focuses for 2 posts they can increase the damage. If the user focuses for 4 posts, they can increase the range (Chosen at time of focus whether it is size or range.)

    Name: Earthen Wall
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Earth
    Description: The user focuses their chakra and performs hand signals and touches the ground to provide a wall of rock in front of them. It lasts for about 3 posts or until destroyed. If the user focuses for 2 posts the wall can become bigger or longer chosen at time of focus.

    Name: Throw Boulder
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: D
    Element: Earth
    Description: The user performs hand signals and focuses their chakra to throw a large boulder at the enemy. It tends to be the closest boulder but if focused on, it can be a larger one. If the user focuses for 1 post, they can enlarge the boulder by one size.

    Name: Strength of Earth
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Earth
    Description: The user infuses their earth chakra with their non-elemental chakra to give them incredible strength. Attacks do 2x damage for 3 posts. If attacked during preparation the jutsu is canceled.

    Name: Earthskin
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Earth
    Description: The user infuses their earth chakra with their non-elemental chakra to give them the endurance of a hard rock. their defense increases 2x for 3 posts. If hit by wind, the effect becomes canceled.

    Name: Earthen Ring
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: D
    Element: Earth
    Description: Jagged rocks shoot up from the earth in random spots around the user. The user must use hand signals and focus their chakra. it goes up one rock per rank. (IE: Genin E: 1 D: 2 C: 3 B: 4 A: 5 S:6 Chuunin E: 7 etc.)

    Name: Thunderbolt
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Lightning
    Description: The user focuses their chakra and uses hand signals to call down a bolt of lightning to strike the ground near them dealing slight damage and slightly throwing the enemy back a little. ONLY USABLE DURING A THUNDERSTORM.

    Name: Thunderous Earth
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth and Lightning
    Description: The user performs numerous hand signals and focuses their chakra around them causing the earth to erupt upward and multiple lightning bolts to strike around the user. If the opponent is not of the wind element, it will take them one post to run down the rocks. Multiple lightning bolts strike the ground in random places. It\'s continued until the user is hit. The amount of lightning bolts that strike at once increase with rank. (IE: Chuunin E: 5 Chuunin D:6 etc. Jounin E: 11 etc.)

    Clan: Uchiha

    History:
    Birth Years
    Sin only remembers his birth years through the pictures he\'s seen. When he was born his mother lost her life due to a lack of blood and being anemic (profusely bleeding with the natural inability to clot). His father was then forced to raise Sin on his own. Around the age of two Sin could walk and talk as well as any 4 or 5 year old and had no qualms with doing so. He enjoyed making other children feel incompetent and stupid. He was never really a bully, but he was always mentally abusive to other people. He never had many friends and really didn\'t care to. When he was 4 he was in a field practicing and preparing for Genin training. As he was focusing his Chakra some random child bumped into Sin as he (sin) was about to release his chakra and threw off his aim. Instead of striking the block of wood, he accidentally struck his father, whom wasn\'t paying attention and couldn\'t avoid the attack. He began keeping a journal of everything after the event.

    Genin Years
    Shortly after Sin graduated, He continued to practice his Genin training preparing for the Chuunin exam. During his time of training he received news that a rogue ninja attacked his father. The ninja lit the house on fire and his father didn\'t make it out in time. He was devastated by this news and discontinued even talking to other students. He focused mainly on training as revenge coursed through his mind and his veins. He bested students one by one, He trained hard and vigilant. He even pushed himself to try to better his teachers. He wanted strength, he wanted power, but most of all, he wanted revenge, destruction, and death to come to those who stood in his way.

    Chuunin Years
    After graduating from Genin, Sin quickly rose through his Chuunin training. He bested most of the other students but was driven by anger and hatred. He graduated early and moved on with his life, living in the wilderness alone for a number of years. He fought for his survival out there, facing bears, wolves, and lions. He struggled to find food, bathed in rivers, and even struggled to find shelter in the bad weather. Through all his tough times in the wilderness however, he continued his training on his own. He was determined to prove his strength.

    Graduation Years
    After Sin graduated he went off in search for high ranked ninjas hoping they could teach him beyond what the school taught, or ever could teach him. He traveled across many terrain and came across a town. He decided to stop and rest there and has yet to pick his travels back up. He now lives in the village and awaits the opportunity to learn more, or to pursue his father\'s murderer.


    RP sample:
    Sin entered the pub. It was a broken down place with broken chairs scattered around the floor and a few broken tables. It looked as if a few bar fights had happened not too long ago. There were many holes in the ceiling and a couple in the walls. Sin walked up to the bar and sat on a stool. The stool caved in and Sin quickly jumped to the side. He looked at the stool and looked at the bartender. He sat on another stool and looked back to the bartender. "Jug of Sake." He threw down some Ryo and the bartender retrieved it and got him his Jug of Sake. Sin began to drink it and examined the place.

    As he was drinking the Bartender nodded to him. "Heavy Drinker?" Sin just glanced at him and went back to drinking. The bartender sighed, "Want anything else?" Sin shook his head no, and the bartender walked away. Another Ninja entered the bar and sat next to Sin. He glanced over at him and began drinking again. The other ninja looked to Sin, "Looks like a rough place huh?". Sin just ignored the question. The other ninja looks back to him. "Not much of a talker are you?" Sin finished his Sake and got up from the bar. He glanced to the bartender and the ninja and left the bar. He looked to the sky and though to himself, "I wonder where the excitement is next." As he walked down the dirt path towards the village.

    He entered the village and saw very few people. He smirked, thinking how great a place this would be to set up his home. Not many people, few distractions, and a good place for someone to attack so he could fight and train. Hoping he'd find that one lone ninja that killed his father. He walked towards the middle and looked around. He looked everywhere for the head of the village so he could speak to them about getting himself a home.


    Last edited by Sintayo Korigochi on Wed May 05, 2010 9:46 am; edited 3 times in total
    Sadara Uchiha
    Sadara Uchiha
    Anbu Black Ops
    Anbu Black Ops


    Posts : 49
    Join date : 2010-04-26
    Age : 31
    Village : Uchiha Roof Top

    Ninja Profile
    Characters:

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Re: Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Sadara Uchiha Wed May 05, 2010 9:20 am

    Ok makeyour genin and chunnin arce a little bit more longer, your jutsu's are ok and will do but need a little bit more work and make your Rp samle maybe 3-4 paragraphs you already got 2 so 1 or 2 more will do for your rank and i will look at it once more.
    Sadara Uchiha
    Sadara Uchiha
    Anbu Black Ops
    Anbu Black Ops


    Posts : 49
    Join date : 2010-04-26
    Age : 31
    Village : Uchiha Roof Top

    Ninja Profile
    Characters:

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Re: Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Sadara Uchiha Wed May 05, 2010 9:31 am

    Make your arcs in color so we don't have to look that hard to find out which is which
    Sadara Uchiha
    Sadara Uchiha
    Anbu Black Ops
    Anbu Black Ops


    Posts : 49
    Join date : 2010-04-26
    Age : 31
    Village : Uchiha Roof Top

    Ninja Profile
    Characters:

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Re: Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Sadara Uchiha Wed May 05, 2010 9:41 am

    Approved!
    Iori
    Iori
    Team Taka Leader
    Team Taka Leader


    Posts : 249
    Join date : 2010-01-15
    Age : 44
    Village : Behind you naked eating a pie

    Ninja Profile
    Characters:

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Re: Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Iori Wed May 05, 2010 2:20 pm

    Not Approved.

    You need to change you'r elements, only Jounin + get two elements. Also extend you'r Arcs if you want to be a chunin.
    Sadara Uchiha
    Sadara Uchiha
    Anbu Black Ops
    Anbu Black Ops


    Posts : 49
    Join date : 2010-04-26
    Age : 31
    Village : Uchiha Roof Top

    Ninja Profile
    Characters:

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Re: Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Sadara Uchiha Wed May 05, 2010 7:04 pm

    Umm i told him that i looked over it twice i made sure he had the Arcs like you said and he said chunnin so i think wait..... yea he can only have one Element,,..... Damnit i thought i had it that time Iori i'm sorry i was doing good though you seen my other posts right instructing him on what to do
    Iori
    Iori
    Team Taka Leader
    Team Taka Leader


    Posts : 249
    Join date : 2010-01-15
    Age : 44
    Village : Behind you naked eating a pie

    Ninja Profile
    Characters:

    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Re: Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Iori Wed May 05, 2010 9:38 pm

    Sadara PM me that stuff.

    Sponsored content


    Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete} Empty Re: Sintayo Korigochi [Genin] {Complete}

    Post by Sponsored content


      Current date/time is Thu May 09, 2024 9:17 pm