I realize that the old Mibu Clan was to god mode but this one is a lot more fair. However this is still my first time trying to RP on an online RPG. So if this new one is still, in your terms, god mode please give me advice on how to DE-rig it. I really want to be apart of this clan.
Name: Mibu
Kekkei Genkai: Satori
Satori
E./D./C./B./A./S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
Satori is a bloodline limit that allows the user the ability to see his opponent’s thoughts. To activate this ability the user needs to concentrate and release a certain part of the brain that to everyone else is unusable except the Mibu due to their bloodline. When the user has the ability active he or she can use several Jutsus that can affect the opponents mind. Satori’s range is based on the user’s rank and/or skill. The amount of Chakra to activate Satori is 1/3 the users overall Chakra pool. As the Ninja progresses it takes no chakra to activate by the time they are of the Jounin level. Uses are: one post to activate and one post to deactivate. Every rank means you can keep the Kekkei Genkai activated for five posts: E.-Rank = 5 posts and S.-Rank = 30 posts, but being of the Kage level means the Kekkei Genkai can be activated and remain active indefinitely or for 40 posts. Also range of Satori is based on Rank, so Genin = 30fr, Chuunin = 60, Jounin = 90, ANBU/Seven Swordsmen = 100ft, and Kage 120ft
The Mibu’s bloodline limit is called the Satori. It is the ability to read peoples Surface Thoughts, Minds, Anticipate an incoming attack, and in some cases control a person’s own mind. The bloodline uses little to no chakra when mastered, but at a young age or even higher stages to keep it active for long periods of time causes great stress on their mind, body, and chakra consumption. The range and chakra cost of Satori is determined by age and skill, so an Academy Student first has to awaken their bloodline by intensive training with a sword and then mentally training their mind until it is as sharp as that sword so that he or she can cut their way into the minds of their enemies to see their inevitable defeat.
Clan history: The Mibu clan is a ninja clan that does not hail from any village. They live in a castle surrounded by a forest far from the Mist Village. They were a rogue clan during the First Great Ninja War and it wasn’t until the end of the Second Great Ninja War that the Mibu were able to settle down and live in single place. The Mibu population is around 160 to 180 including shinobi and villagers. Very few people or ninjas are ever given the chance to meet or see the Mibu Clan because they own their own piece of land in the Country of Water and wish to be left alone. The Mibu clan is a clan of swordsmen who has perfected their own sword style known as Shinmei Ryu. The Shinmei Ryu is a sword style created by the Mibu that allows them to communicate with swords so well that they can wield any kind of sword. The Mibu are a prideful clan who believe that the only way to live is to live by the sword with honor, similar to samurai, but still retaining Ninjutsu. The Mibu, if called upon by the Lord of the Land of Water, will heed any of his requests, except joining or divulging secrets to anyone outside the clan. That is because he has allowed them to live independently from the Mist Village so long as they are willing to obey his commands and protect this country if he calls upon them. The Mibu has the ninja rank status within their own clan, but their strongest ninja in the clan is called the Elder Sage due to the fact the Water Country already has the Mist villages Mizukage and the two societies are separated. The Elder Sage is not only the strongest ninja in the clan, but the clan leader. The Mibu do not concern themselves with the outside world because the outside world is filled with undisciplined shinobi who would rather kill each other then live in peace. Recently however some members of the Mibu Clan have wondered what its like to live outside the castle walls and forest and see what living in ninja villages is like. However the Mibu that choose to leave the castle grounds and join the outside world are hence forth banned from returning and will be considered traitors for doing so. No one may return to the clan after choosing to leave it for the outside world less their taint effect the next generation of Mibu clansmen. Most Mibu members who leave usually live in the Mist, Cloud, or Leaf village because of relative travel distance.
Native village: The Mibu Clan belongs to no village, but if a Mibu chooses to leave the grounds, which means either they were forced out or they chose to leave they are now banned from returning, they become nomadic until they reach a village or a town they consider home. The closest villages are: Mist, Cloud, and finally Leaf.
Clan's enemy: The Mibu has no enemies per say; they just don't like conversing or interacting with anyone not from their clan or sent by the Lord of the Land of Water as a representative of the Lord.
Clan alliances: The Mibu is in debt to the Lord of the Land of Water because he allows them to live in peace in the Water Country. However the Mibu do respect Samurai or Shinobi that live by the sword and Shinobi that use mind affecting Jutsus. So the Mist Villages Seven Swordsmen and Killer Bee of the Cloud Village as well as the Uchiha's Sharingan, for its ability to cast powerful Genjutsu's.
Clan symbol: The Symbol of the Mibu is a sword slicing into a brain. It represents their ability to cut into your mind with a simple stroke. http://www.exhibitionistnyc.com/pictures/wa00705d/l/exh09280576l.jpg
Clan weapon: All types of swords and their special swords made of a metal material known as Chakra Blades.
Clan Jutsus:
Blade Affinity
D-Rank
Kenjutsu, Chakra Control
Blade Affinity is the first step in Mibu swordsmanship, by inserting ones Chakra into a sword the blade becomes an extension of ones self and feels lighter because of it. The sword also becomes easier to wield in combat, however only certain swords apply at this stage such as: short, broken, scimitars, or a katana.
Shinmei Ryu
A-Rank
Kenjutsu, Chakra Control.
The Shinmei Ryu is a sword style created by the Mibu that allows them to communicate with swords so well that they can wield any kind of sword: short, broken, broad, long, scimitars, katana, bastard, great, executioner, or buster sword. Also any and all swords wielded by a Mibu feel lighter in their hands (due to the inserting of their Chakra into their swords) then they would in others, especially if they are wielding heavy swords. Note: they don’t actually converse with them they, just have an understanding of how they work as if they asked the sword how do I wield you like a true master and they explain in a matter of seconds how they are supposed to be wielded.
Surface Thoughts
D.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When Satori is active one can read the surface thoughts of someone they are targeting or concentrating on. This can not be done in combat. This allows you a hint of what they are thinking not what they are thinking. Uses are: once per two posts on the targets following post. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
At Genin; the Mibu Shinobi should have been awakened his Satori otherwise they do not graduate from the Academy. The range of the Satori at this age is around 30 feet and can only read Surface Thoughts about what they are thinking about at this given time, but its only a hint like they hear can hear and make out certain words, but not the whole thing. At this young age to keep the Satori active all day it will consume a large amount of their overall chakra and will have to rest for 2 to 3 days to recover from stress on the mind, if the Satori is kept active for less then a day they only rest for 1 day. Mastering the Surface Thought requires posting 15 different training seminars at least a paragraph long.
Read Mind
C.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When the Satori is active one can read the mind of someone they are targeting or concentrating on. This cannot be done in combat, but is an excellent way to gather information from a captured enemy. This allows you to read their mind for a short duration, but only for a short time. Uses are: once per two posts on the targets next two posts. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
Once the Genin has mastered the active Satori’s read Surface Thought ability they are promoted to Chuunin and their training to Read Mind’s begins with a teacher or Sensei instructing them. The difference between Surface Thoughts and Read Mind is that Surface Thoughts are what they are thinking about at this given time and Read Mind is what they are thinking about right at this very moment and continues to read their mind. However in order to fully be able to Read Mind the user must be more skilled in rank and ability then the opponent. So a Chuunin against anything equal to or below it like Chuunin, Genin, or Student is readable, but Jounin and up have the ability to code their thoughts into different words and still know what their talking about. So a Chuunin reading a Jounin's mind would here a reference to “Make Out Tactics” and would actually be planning to attack you to kill you. At Chuunin level the Satori’s range has increased to 60 feet, should have mastered Surface Thoughts, and has already begun their Read Mind training. The Mibu should also have learned to conserve the amount of Chakra needed to keep his/her Satori active a whole day or more and only need to rest for 2 days. Mastering Read Mind requires posting 20 different training seminars at least a paragraph long.
Anticipate
B.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When the Satori is active one can use their surface thoughts or read mind in combat. This allows the Ninja to anticipate where the enemy plan’s to hit and how, where, and when this hit will take place. Uses are: once per three posts on the targets next post. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
Once the Chuunin has mastered both Surface Thoughts, Read Mind, and has made better use of controlling his Chakra, as well as met the standards for a Jounin, they are bestowed the rank of Jounin and have now reached the skill needed to attempt to use Anticipate on enemies. Anticipate allows the Mibu to use his Satori to Read the opponents mind well enough to determine when, what, and where an enemy will attack by reading his mind in combat. Just like Read Mind its user must be of equal or higher rank and skill to read an opponents mind in combat. So if a ninja were fighting a Jounin Mibu and he was going to use fire ball Jutsu the moment he jumped out of cover and would aim for the Mibu’s chest for maximum damage the Mibu would hear all that from his mind and plan a perfect counter attack given he had the speed and tactical knowledge to do so. Jounins must train alone to acquire this ability, no help from others is allowed. Satori’s new range is now 90 feet at this stage of development and it only uses a portion of their chakra to activate Satori for the duration of a day with 1 nights rest. To Master Anticipate for combat you must train by posting 25 different training seminars at least a paragraph long.
Adv. Anticipate
A.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When the Satori is active one can use their surface thoughts or read mind in combat. This allows the Ninja to anticipate where the enemy plan’s to hit and how, where, and when this hit will take place. This is just an improved version of Anticipate. The only difference is you may read the opponents mind a while longer then usual. Uses are: once per four posts on the targets next two posts. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
Secret Clan Jutsu: Must pick one of the two, not both:
After the Mibu has mastered the Anticipate ability and reached the limit of his abilities, thus far, there is only one thing left for the Mibu to do, seek training from a village elder in mastering one of the last two of the three final abilities of Satori. This is only permitted to those who have earned the rank of Shingan (equivalent to ANBU or the Seven Swordsmen) or stole the secret scrolls of the Mibu and learned them in secret (usually considered rogue Ninja and hunted till captured or killed, perfect for an Akatsuki member). If the Elder Sage permits the Jounin to this Rank it is because they have shown they are exceptionally adequate Shinobi or a previous member of Shingan has died, only 10 Shingan are permitted unless the Elder Sage sees room for expansion of the clan
Instant Mind Scan
S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
The Ninja may use an instant mind scan to read the persons mind allowing him to see what the opponent has, is, and will soon be thinking. Uses are: once per five posts on the targets last two and next two posts. Limit 5 times per day.
Instant Mind Scan is used to Probe the mind of an opponent to learn all his secrets, abilities, and tactics down to his recent memory; it also allows you to use your other abilities on ninjas who are of higher skill or rank then you, but so long as they have been scanned first like Kages or Sanin. Only a village elder or former Shingan can teach one how to use the Instant Mind Scan ability. Even though this ability is great, there is a heavy consequence to using it. One: the amount of Chakra used up is a portion of your overall Chakra to activate it. Two: the users mind can only use this ability for 5 times a day. Three: after using this ability to its limit a Mibu must acquire rest or sleep within 30 to 45 minutes or collapse of exhaustion, if one does collapse of exhaustion before reaching a safe place to sleep he will be unable to wake up for 3 days from mental and physical stress on the mind and body. These abilities are forbidden in some cases and can only be unlocked by Mibu with a strong bloodline or talent. These abilities are forbidden in some cases and can only be unlocked by Mibu with a strong bloodline or talent. In simple terms this is used as a last ditch effort move when unable to read a more skilled opponents mind because of difference in ability. The Range of Satori is increased to 100 feet, to master using the mind scan abilities you must post 25 training seminars and post must be 1 paragraph long.
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Multiple Mind Scan
S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
The Ninja may use his surface thoughts, read mind, anticipate, or adv. anticipate on two targets now instead of one. Uses are: once per five posts on both of the targets for their next two posts.
Multiple Mind Scan allows the Mibu to use his Satori to read multiple Surface Thoughts, Read Mind, and Anticipate on two different targets at once an continues to do so till opponents die or flee and escape range of Satori. Only a village elder or former Shingan can teach one how to use the Multiple Mind Scan ability. Even though this ability is great, there are heavy consequences to using it. One: the amount of Chakra used up is a portion of your overall Chakra to activate either of them. Two: the users mind can only use this ability 5 times a day. Three: after using this ability to its limit a Mibu must acquire rest or sleep within 30 to 45 minutes or collapse of exhaustion, if one does collapse of exhaustion before reaching a safe place to sleep he will be unable to wake up for 3 days from mental and physical stress on the mind and body. This ability is considered forbidden in some cases and can only be unlocked by Mibu with a strong bloodline or talent. In simple terms this is used as a last ditch effort move when facing several foes. The Range of Satori is increased to 100, to master using the multiple mind scan ability you must post 25 training post and they must be 1 paragraph long at least. Limit 5 times per day.
Note: Only available to the Elder Sage in the Mibu Clan, cannot be used unless creator of site allows it. Because they have their own form of a village in their own clan and only the Elder Sage has this ability unless Mibu Castle becomes a village by administrators OK, or moderators OK, the Elder Sage can not use Nen as a Kage in another village.
Nen (Desire)
S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
A Jutsu which allows you to control the mind of a Ninja by forcing your own thoughts into his mind making him due 1 thing regardless what it is once a post, so: run away, come here, drop weapon, lie down, sit, stab self in leg/arm/stomach (head and heart not allowed unless opponent is Chuunin or lower), stab friend, dislocate own arm, break own arm, don’t move, release hostage, release Jutsu, etc. (note: only simple commands not complex ones like pulling out an explosive tag put it in your mouth and detonate it). This Jutsu can only be canceled if an ally Shinobi forces their own Chakra into the controlled persons mind removing any disturbances in their Chakra flow within their brain, like a Genjutsu except no eye contact is needed they just have to be within range of the user’s Satori and it costs a portion of your overall chakra to use with minimal risk and a good nights rest to recuperate. Uses are: Once per four posts on the opponent’s next post they must obey the command and do it. Limit 3 per day
After attaining several years of observation, or the passing of the Elder Sage, the village elders choose one of the Shingan to become the new Elder Sage of the Mibu. Once selected the Shingan must defeat each of his fellow Shingan clansmen in combat one at a time to determine if he or she is truly the strongest of the Shingan. If he or she defeats his/her fellow clansmen then they are declared the strongest Shinobi in the clan and are bestowed the rank of Elder Sage and head of the Mibu clan. Upon acceptance of the role the Elder Sage is given all the ninja scrolls and learns the final secrets of the clan. The Elder Sages Satori has become perfect and its Range becomes 120 feet. They also gain both of the S.-Rank abilities Instant and Multiple Mind Scan abilities and they achieve the final ability of the clan. An S.-Rank Jutsu called Nen (Desire) a Jutsu which allows you to control the mind of a Ninja by forcing your own thoughts into his mind making him due 1 thing regardless what it is once a post, so: run away, come here, drop weapon, lie down, sit, stab self in leg/arm/stomach (head and heart not allowed unless opponent is Chuunin or lower), stab friend, dislocate own arm, break own arm, don’t move, release hostage, release Jutsu, etc. (note: only simple commands not complex ones like pulling out an explosive tag put it in your mouth and detonate it). This Jutsu can only be canceled if an ally Shinobi forces their own Chakra into the controlled persons mind removing any disturbances in their Chakra flow within their brain, like a Genjutsu except no eye contact is needed they just have to be within range of the user’s Satori and it costs a large portion of your overall chakra to use with no draw backs. If Instant Mind Scan is used on a Jounin or higher they are affected by Nen regardless of rank because you know everything about them and you can use their secrets to weaken their state of mind.
Note: Unless Mibu Castle becomes a village by administrators OK, or moderators OK, the Elder Sage can not use Nen as a Kage in another village the only benefits will be 125 feet Satori range, Perfect Satori, and Mind Scan abilities activation can now be used 7 times per day.
Clan Public or Single: The Mibu Clan may be public but it must have a restriction of 10 to 20 members in all.
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Name: Mibu
Kekkei Genkai: Satori
Satori
E./D./C./B./A./S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
Satori is a bloodline limit that allows the user the ability to see his opponent’s thoughts. To activate this ability the user needs to concentrate and release a certain part of the brain that to everyone else is unusable except the Mibu due to their bloodline. When the user has the ability active he or she can use several Jutsus that can affect the opponents mind. Satori’s range is based on the user’s rank and/or skill. The amount of Chakra to activate Satori is 1/3 the users overall Chakra pool. As the Ninja progresses it takes no chakra to activate by the time they are of the Jounin level. Uses are: one post to activate and one post to deactivate. Every rank means you can keep the Kekkei Genkai activated for five posts: E.-Rank = 5 posts and S.-Rank = 30 posts, but being of the Kage level means the Kekkei Genkai can be activated and remain active indefinitely or for 40 posts. Also range of Satori is based on Rank, so Genin = 30fr, Chuunin = 60, Jounin = 90, ANBU/Seven Swordsmen = 100ft, and Kage 120ft
The Mibu’s bloodline limit is called the Satori. It is the ability to read peoples Surface Thoughts, Minds, Anticipate an incoming attack, and in some cases control a person’s own mind. The bloodline uses little to no chakra when mastered, but at a young age or even higher stages to keep it active for long periods of time causes great stress on their mind, body, and chakra consumption. The range and chakra cost of Satori is determined by age and skill, so an Academy Student first has to awaken their bloodline by intensive training with a sword and then mentally training their mind until it is as sharp as that sword so that he or she can cut their way into the minds of their enemies to see their inevitable defeat.
Clan history: The Mibu clan is a ninja clan that does not hail from any village. They live in a castle surrounded by a forest far from the Mist Village. They were a rogue clan during the First Great Ninja War and it wasn’t until the end of the Second Great Ninja War that the Mibu were able to settle down and live in single place. The Mibu population is around 160 to 180 including shinobi and villagers. Very few people or ninjas are ever given the chance to meet or see the Mibu Clan because they own their own piece of land in the Country of Water and wish to be left alone. The Mibu clan is a clan of swordsmen who has perfected their own sword style known as Shinmei Ryu. The Shinmei Ryu is a sword style created by the Mibu that allows them to communicate with swords so well that they can wield any kind of sword. The Mibu are a prideful clan who believe that the only way to live is to live by the sword with honor, similar to samurai, but still retaining Ninjutsu. The Mibu, if called upon by the Lord of the Land of Water, will heed any of his requests, except joining or divulging secrets to anyone outside the clan. That is because he has allowed them to live independently from the Mist Village so long as they are willing to obey his commands and protect this country if he calls upon them. The Mibu has the ninja rank status within their own clan, but their strongest ninja in the clan is called the Elder Sage due to the fact the Water Country already has the Mist villages Mizukage and the two societies are separated. The Elder Sage is not only the strongest ninja in the clan, but the clan leader. The Mibu do not concern themselves with the outside world because the outside world is filled with undisciplined shinobi who would rather kill each other then live in peace. Recently however some members of the Mibu Clan have wondered what its like to live outside the castle walls and forest and see what living in ninja villages is like. However the Mibu that choose to leave the castle grounds and join the outside world are hence forth banned from returning and will be considered traitors for doing so. No one may return to the clan after choosing to leave it for the outside world less their taint effect the next generation of Mibu clansmen. Most Mibu members who leave usually live in the Mist, Cloud, or Leaf village because of relative travel distance.
Native village: The Mibu Clan belongs to no village, but if a Mibu chooses to leave the grounds, which means either they were forced out or they chose to leave they are now banned from returning, they become nomadic until they reach a village or a town they consider home. The closest villages are: Mist, Cloud, and finally Leaf.
Clan's enemy: The Mibu has no enemies per say; they just don't like conversing or interacting with anyone not from their clan or sent by the Lord of the Land of Water as a representative of the Lord.
Clan alliances: The Mibu is in debt to the Lord of the Land of Water because he allows them to live in peace in the Water Country. However the Mibu do respect Samurai or Shinobi that live by the sword and Shinobi that use mind affecting Jutsus. So the Mist Villages Seven Swordsmen and Killer Bee of the Cloud Village as well as the Uchiha's Sharingan, for its ability to cast powerful Genjutsu's.
Clan symbol: The Symbol of the Mibu is a sword slicing into a brain. It represents their ability to cut into your mind with a simple stroke. http://www.exhibitionistnyc.com/pictures/wa00705d/l/exh09280576l.jpg
Clan weapon: All types of swords and their special swords made of a metal material known as Chakra Blades.
Clan Jutsus:
Blade Affinity
D-Rank
Kenjutsu, Chakra Control
Blade Affinity is the first step in Mibu swordsmanship, by inserting ones Chakra into a sword the blade becomes an extension of ones self and feels lighter because of it. The sword also becomes easier to wield in combat, however only certain swords apply at this stage such as: short, broken, scimitars, or a katana.
Shinmei Ryu
A-Rank
Kenjutsu, Chakra Control.
The Shinmei Ryu is a sword style created by the Mibu that allows them to communicate with swords so well that they can wield any kind of sword: short, broken, broad, long, scimitars, katana, bastard, great, executioner, or buster sword. Also any and all swords wielded by a Mibu feel lighter in their hands (due to the inserting of their Chakra into their swords) then they would in others, especially if they are wielding heavy swords. Note: they don’t actually converse with them they, just have an understanding of how they work as if they asked the sword how do I wield you like a true master and they explain in a matter of seconds how they are supposed to be wielded.
Surface Thoughts
D.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When Satori is active one can read the surface thoughts of someone they are targeting or concentrating on. This can not be done in combat. This allows you a hint of what they are thinking not what they are thinking. Uses are: once per two posts on the targets following post. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
At Genin; the Mibu Shinobi should have been awakened his Satori otherwise they do not graduate from the Academy. The range of the Satori at this age is around 30 feet and can only read Surface Thoughts about what they are thinking about at this given time, but its only a hint like they hear can hear and make out certain words, but not the whole thing. At this young age to keep the Satori active all day it will consume a large amount of their overall chakra and will have to rest for 2 to 3 days to recover from stress on the mind, if the Satori is kept active for less then a day they only rest for 1 day. Mastering the Surface Thought requires posting 15 different training seminars at least a paragraph long.
Read Mind
C.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When the Satori is active one can read the mind of someone they are targeting or concentrating on. This cannot be done in combat, but is an excellent way to gather information from a captured enemy. This allows you to read their mind for a short duration, but only for a short time. Uses are: once per two posts on the targets next two posts. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
Once the Genin has mastered the active Satori’s read Surface Thought ability they are promoted to Chuunin and their training to Read Mind’s begins with a teacher or Sensei instructing them. The difference between Surface Thoughts and Read Mind is that Surface Thoughts are what they are thinking about at this given time and Read Mind is what they are thinking about right at this very moment and continues to read their mind. However in order to fully be able to Read Mind the user must be more skilled in rank and ability then the opponent. So a Chuunin against anything equal to or below it like Chuunin, Genin, or Student is readable, but Jounin and up have the ability to code their thoughts into different words and still know what their talking about. So a Chuunin reading a Jounin's mind would here a reference to “Make Out Tactics” and would actually be planning to attack you to kill you. At Chuunin level the Satori’s range has increased to 60 feet, should have mastered Surface Thoughts, and has already begun their Read Mind training. The Mibu should also have learned to conserve the amount of Chakra needed to keep his/her Satori active a whole day or more and only need to rest for 2 days. Mastering Read Mind requires posting 20 different training seminars at least a paragraph long.
Anticipate
B.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When the Satori is active one can use their surface thoughts or read mind in combat. This allows the Ninja to anticipate where the enemy plan’s to hit and how, where, and when this hit will take place. Uses are: once per three posts on the targets next post. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
Once the Chuunin has mastered both Surface Thoughts, Read Mind, and has made better use of controlling his Chakra, as well as met the standards for a Jounin, they are bestowed the rank of Jounin and have now reached the skill needed to attempt to use Anticipate on enemies. Anticipate allows the Mibu to use his Satori to Read the opponents mind well enough to determine when, what, and where an enemy will attack by reading his mind in combat. Just like Read Mind its user must be of equal or higher rank and skill to read an opponents mind in combat. So if a ninja were fighting a Jounin Mibu and he was going to use fire ball Jutsu the moment he jumped out of cover and would aim for the Mibu’s chest for maximum damage the Mibu would hear all that from his mind and plan a perfect counter attack given he had the speed and tactical knowledge to do so. Jounins must train alone to acquire this ability, no help from others is allowed. Satori’s new range is now 90 feet at this stage of development and it only uses a portion of their chakra to activate Satori for the duration of a day with 1 nights rest. To Master Anticipate for combat you must train by posting 25 different training seminars at least a paragraph long.
Adv. Anticipate
A.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
When the Satori is active one can use their surface thoughts or read mind in combat. This allows the Ninja to anticipate where the enemy plan’s to hit and how, where, and when this hit will take place. This is just an improved version of Anticipate. The only difference is you may read the opponents mind a while longer then usual. Uses are: once per four posts on the targets next two posts. Able to use so long as Satori is still activated.
Secret Clan Jutsu: Must pick one of the two, not both:
After the Mibu has mastered the Anticipate ability and reached the limit of his abilities, thus far, there is only one thing left for the Mibu to do, seek training from a village elder in mastering one of the last two of the three final abilities of Satori. This is only permitted to those who have earned the rank of Shingan (equivalent to ANBU or the Seven Swordsmen) or stole the secret scrolls of the Mibu and learned them in secret (usually considered rogue Ninja and hunted till captured or killed, perfect for an Akatsuki member). If the Elder Sage permits the Jounin to this Rank it is because they have shown they are exceptionally adequate Shinobi or a previous member of Shingan has died, only 10 Shingan are permitted unless the Elder Sage sees room for expansion of the clan
Instant Mind Scan
S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
The Ninja may use an instant mind scan to read the persons mind allowing him to see what the opponent has, is, and will soon be thinking. Uses are: once per five posts on the targets last two and next two posts. Limit 5 times per day.
Instant Mind Scan is used to Probe the mind of an opponent to learn all his secrets, abilities, and tactics down to his recent memory; it also allows you to use your other abilities on ninjas who are of higher skill or rank then you, but so long as they have been scanned first like Kages or Sanin. Only a village elder or former Shingan can teach one how to use the Instant Mind Scan ability. Even though this ability is great, there is a heavy consequence to using it. One: the amount of Chakra used up is a portion of your overall Chakra to activate it. Two: the users mind can only use this ability for 5 times a day. Three: after using this ability to its limit a Mibu must acquire rest or sleep within 30 to 45 minutes or collapse of exhaustion, if one does collapse of exhaustion before reaching a safe place to sleep he will be unable to wake up for 3 days from mental and physical stress on the mind and body. These abilities are forbidden in some cases and can only be unlocked by Mibu with a strong bloodline or talent. These abilities are forbidden in some cases and can only be unlocked by Mibu with a strong bloodline or talent. In simple terms this is used as a last ditch effort move when unable to read a more skilled opponents mind because of difference in ability. The Range of Satori is increased to 100 feet, to master using the mind scan abilities you must post 25 training seminars and post must be 1 paragraph long.
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Multiple Mind Scan
S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
The Ninja may use his surface thoughts, read mind, anticipate, or adv. anticipate on two targets now instead of one. Uses are: once per five posts on both of the targets for their next two posts.
Multiple Mind Scan allows the Mibu to use his Satori to read multiple Surface Thoughts, Read Mind, and Anticipate on two different targets at once an continues to do so till opponents die or flee and escape range of Satori. Only a village elder or former Shingan can teach one how to use the Multiple Mind Scan ability. Even though this ability is great, there are heavy consequences to using it. One: the amount of Chakra used up is a portion of your overall Chakra to activate either of them. Two: the users mind can only use this ability 5 times a day. Three: after using this ability to its limit a Mibu must acquire rest or sleep within 30 to 45 minutes or collapse of exhaustion, if one does collapse of exhaustion before reaching a safe place to sleep he will be unable to wake up for 3 days from mental and physical stress on the mind and body. This ability is considered forbidden in some cases and can only be unlocked by Mibu with a strong bloodline or talent. In simple terms this is used as a last ditch effort move when facing several foes. The Range of Satori is increased to 100, to master using the multiple mind scan ability you must post 25 training post and they must be 1 paragraph long at least. Limit 5 times per day.
Note: Only available to the Elder Sage in the Mibu Clan, cannot be used unless creator of site allows it. Because they have their own form of a village in their own clan and only the Elder Sage has this ability unless Mibu Castle becomes a village by administrators OK, or moderators OK, the Elder Sage can not use Nen as a Kage in another village.
Nen (Desire)
S.-Rank
Kekkei Genkai, Chakra Control, Mind Affecting.
A Jutsu which allows you to control the mind of a Ninja by forcing your own thoughts into his mind making him due 1 thing regardless what it is once a post, so: run away, come here, drop weapon, lie down, sit, stab self in leg/arm/stomach (head and heart not allowed unless opponent is Chuunin or lower), stab friend, dislocate own arm, break own arm, don’t move, release hostage, release Jutsu, etc. (note: only simple commands not complex ones like pulling out an explosive tag put it in your mouth and detonate it). This Jutsu can only be canceled if an ally Shinobi forces their own Chakra into the controlled persons mind removing any disturbances in their Chakra flow within their brain, like a Genjutsu except no eye contact is needed they just have to be within range of the user’s Satori and it costs a portion of your overall chakra to use with minimal risk and a good nights rest to recuperate. Uses are: Once per four posts on the opponent’s next post they must obey the command and do it. Limit 3 per day
After attaining several years of observation, or the passing of the Elder Sage, the village elders choose one of the Shingan to become the new Elder Sage of the Mibu. Once selected the Shingan must defeat each of his fellow Shingan clansmen in combat one at a time to determine if he or she is truly the strongest of the Shingan. If he or she defeats his/her fellow clansmen then they are declared the strongest Shinobi in the clan and are bestowed the rank of Elder Sage and head of the Mibu clan. Upon acceptance of the role the Elder Sage is given all the ninja scrolls and learns the final secrets of the clan. The Elder Sages Satori has become perfect and its Range becomes 120 feet. They also gain both of the S.-Rank abilities Instant and Multiple Mind Scan abilities and they achieve the final ability of the clan. An S.-Rank Jutsu called Nen (Desire) a Jutsu which allows you to control the mind of a Ninja by forcing your own thoughts into his mind making him due 1 thing regardless what it is once a post, so: run away, come here, drop weapon, lie down, sit, stab self in leg/arm/stomach (head and heart not allowed unless opponent is Chuunin or lower), stab friend, dislocate own arm, break own arm, don’t move, release hostage, release Jutsu, etc. (note: only simple commands not complex ones like pulling out an explosive tag put it in your mouth and detonate it). This Jutsu can only be canceled if an ally Shinobi forces their own Chakra into the controlled persons mind removing any disturbances in their Chakra flow within their brain, like a Genjutsu except no eye contact is needed they just have to be within range of the user’s Satori and it costs a large portion of your overall chakra to use with no draw backs. If Instant Mind Scan is used on a Jounin or higher they are affected by Nen regardless of rank because you know everything about them and you can use their secrets to weaken their state of mind.
Note: Unless Mibu Castle becomes a village by administrators OK, or moderators OK, the Elder Sage can not use Nen as a Kage in another village the only benefits will be 125 feet Satori range, Perfect Satori, and Mind Scan abilities activation can now be used 7 times per day.
Clan Public or Single: The Mibu Clan may be public but it must have a restriction of 10 to 20 members in all.
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Last edited by Hiatagi Mibu on Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:57 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : messed up spelling)
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